tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4952567375031811784.post3629263836188127869..comments2023-06-18T10:14:21.018-05:00Comments on Than's Thought Collection: Trip Out East Part 4 (Philadelphia Fun)Nathanaelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07048790259774260482noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4952567375031811784.post-48410351600869529322008-06-22T19:29:00.000-05:002008-06-22T19:29:00.000-05:00I like your photos! You are good at summarizing t...I like your photos! You are good at summarizing things.Joannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01810380889507349618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4952567375031811784.post-45778890293173297862008-06-20T23:43:00.000-05:002008-06-20T23:43:00.000-05:00Wow! Good updates! You are becoming quite a write...Wow! Good updates! You are becoming quite a writer!Jena Webberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17385358595707452914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4952567375031811784.post-20787816998271482412008-06-19T19:19:00.000-05:002008-06-19T19:19:00.000-05:00Than, You re-tell the story so well!Here's some...Than,<BR/> You re-tell the story so well!<BR/>Here's some grammar thoughts:<BR/>You started out the post in the past tense.<BR/>"we drove" and "we had", but then you switched to present tense "we stop". Did you mean to say, "stopped"? <BR/><BR/>Also, twice you started sentences with either And or But. This is O.K. occasionally, but you shouldn't get into the habit of it. <BR/>Nice posting! Love to read your stuff.Jena Webberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17385358595707452914noreply@blogger.com